Ace Attorney: Courtroom Catfight

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Ace Attorney: Courtroom Catfight

Postby Lord Noon on Tue Jun 28, 2011 9:44 pm

Okay, this is my first time issuing a request, so if something isn't clear - or is just plain wrong - please point it out, 'kay?

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Ace Attorney: Courtroom Catfight
Mia Fey vs. Franziska von Karma


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Mia:
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Franziska:
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Preferred style: Anime

Layout: 2 panels, 2/3rd split with the 1st panel larger than the second

Backdrop: An empty courtroom, if possible. Nothing too fancy, just long wooden benches on either side of a tiled floor, with stations for the prosecution and the defense facing one another, and the judge's...er, pulpit-thing (?) in the centre and pressed back against the wall. This is the typical court design used in the Ace Attorney games:

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Apologies about all these big pics, but it's hard to find smaller ones with good detail.

Caption (printed at top-left corner if possible): [The recent trial of the suspected 'Tulip Note' murderer had taken an unfortunate turn that day, as veteran defense attorney Mia Fey had let the goading and superior tone of her opposite number, second-generation prosecutor Franziska von Karma, get into her head. The resulting tirade of foul language and threats had forced the judge to suspend the trial for a further week to let both parties 'cool off'. But neither woman had any intention of letting things go so peacefully...
Mia sent a quick text message to her rival after being escorted back to her office: "I'm sick of seeing your face across the court from me. Meet me in courtroom no.2 at midnight and we'll settle this OUR way. Whoever loses forfeits their case."
Mia arrived early, and kept one eye on her watch as the minutes counted down, her blood rushing, sweat dripping down the back of her neck. Punctual as ever, Franziska arrived mere seconds before the hands both hit 12 - and immediately went on the attack, fastening her hands around Mia's throat!]

(oof, that's a lot longer than I thought it'd be...)

Panel 1:
Both women are on their feet, with Franziska standing straight in front of Mia - so close their legs and crotches are pushing against one another - and leaning forwards, with her arms outstretched and hands wrapped around Mia's neck. A wicked smile is apparent on her face.
Mia is forced to lean back against the defense attorney's station - that's one of the two 'L'-shaped benches in front of the jury seats - thanks to Franziska's chokehold. Her long hair fans out across the desk. She has her eyes screwed shut and her teeth bared in a grimace of pain. One of her hands is clawing at Franziska's grip, whilst the other is stretched across the bench, with the hand resting upon the handle of one of those little hammers the judge uses to call order (forgot the name).

Franziska: "You disappoint me, Mia Fey! I was hoping for a test, but it seems you fight as weakly as you defend your clients!"
Mia: "Ungh! You...m-might be right...ack - !"
Mia (2nd speech bubble): "B-but...maybe not...if I..."

Panel 2:
Close-up shot, showing only the upper bodies of both women. Mia swings the judge's hammer around in a wide arc, smashing it against the side of Franziska's face. Mia has a determined scowl on her face, and has raised herself a little bit off the bench as Franziska's grip abruptly weakens.
Franziska still has one hand around Mia's throat, but the other is loose and clawing at thin air. The hammer blow knocks her head to the side in such a way that she's facing 'out' of the picture, towards the viewer. Her eyes are scrunched up tight in sudden agony, and her mouth is hanging open and lopsided. A gob of mixed blood and saliva flies from her open mouth, propelled by the hammer's impact.

Mia: " - fight dirty, just like YOU!"
Franziska: "AAAARGH!"

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I think that's it. Don't know why this idea came to me, but I noticed there aren't any Ace Attorney-related pics on the site as it stands, and I've just started getting into these games. And before anyone asks, I'm aware of Franziska's prized whip. If this one turns out well, I'm definitely saving that for a part 2 or 3. :)
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Re: Ace Attorney: Courtroom Catfight

Postby nichx on Wed Jun 29, 2011 8:21 am

Really clear description to the story.
That will help me to get closer as well as you wanted.

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Re: Ace Attorney: Courtroom Catfight

Postby nichx on Mon Jul 11, 2011 2:05 pm

Hope you love this one! :)

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Let me know what you think?
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Re: Ace Attorney: Courtroom Catfight

Postby Lord Noon on Mon Jul 11, 2011 4:21 pm

*claps* Perfecto! Exactly what I was hoping for. Amazing work, nichx! :D
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Re: Ace Attorney: Courtroom Catfight

Postby nichx on Mon Jul 11, 2011 4:33 pm

Glad to hear you love it! :)
Thanks!
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Re: Ace Attorney: Courtroom Catfight

Postby mr gene on Mon Jul 11, 2011 4:59 pm

ace work i was wondering where hey came from
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